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Application Paragraph Paper 2

Application Paragraph Paper 2

Q • The body of the paragraph should include: 2 Claims o One claim about whether you had participation-based or merit-based rewards when you were a kid or teen in sports or other hobbies and how it made you feel (Topic #1) o One claim about the degree to which your experience supports or refutes any of the participation trophy critiques (Topic #2)

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In our school, several competitions were held, and I used to take part in dance competitions. However, we were not given any participation trophy, which helped me work hard and take criticisms easily, which helped me later in life. There were three prizes for the first three, and others were praised for participation but did not receive any medal. Merit-based rewards in our school encouraged me to work harder.